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The video game Twisted Memories' protagonist is an ugly, grotesque jerk who goes back in time and becomes his younger self. So what can you expect from a normal-looking youngster with the mind of a twisted older man? How many women from his past will he be able to corrupt? Will he finally get the chance to create the ideal harem, or will he finally discover the one true love he's been searching for?
It's entirely up to you to decide.
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anon - Aug 13, 2024
🤓 However, the writing is unpolished. It frequently shifts tenses unpredictably, alternating between past and present. The MC's inner monologues are repetitive and often drag on longer than necessary. Run-on sentences, typos, and confusing word choices are present, and while these issues start off as minor, they become increasingly noticeable.
With that critique in mind, I genuinely think it would be a shame not to give this game a chance. The pros absolutely outweigh the cons. A lot of work went into it, and it’s pretty fun! Just don't go in expecting Hemingway or something. Besides, I just used two unnecessary adverbs in the same paragraph, so who am I to judge anyone's quality of writing?
Happy fapping!
anon - Aug 14, 2024
"...eventually you gaze fell upon Cathrine."
Stephanie: "You're staring again!"
MC: "No I don't!"
Stephanie: "And how you do!"
"Well, starting right with her probably is a bit of too big leap..."
"...her jealousy for Cathrine is probably the pervect tool..."
"And on thing you can definitely believe me, I wouldn't give you up for anything in the world."
"That definitely sound like a plan..."
"...to whisper sweet nothing in your ear..."
"...Stephanie and Leo, where the latter of whom...
"...my primarily goal is to take care of Alyvia..."
"There has just been a lot on my mind, thats all."
"Uuuuh... And when this?"
"Uuuuh, not like there was to jump at one back then."
You get the picture. As you can see, the characters often speak like broken NPCs.
Also, take a shot every time a character says 'nonsense,' and you'll be facing alcohol poisoning in no time.
anon - Aug 14, 2024
I've now reached a section in the story where these issues have become so distracting that I occasionally have to reread text once or twice just to decipher its meaning.
Example: "Cathrine really does [some] like she was made for such a role... And God knows, I too have [tantilized] about stealing another man's love too often..."
- "Some" should be "seem."
- "Tantalized" makes no sense in that sentence. I believe the writer meant, "fantasized."
That's just one example, but nearly every paragraph in the last 80 pages has had similar or worse issues. The sudden drop in quality sometimes makes it difficult to understand what characters are saying. I'm not trying to nitpick, but these issues disrupt the flow and comprehension of the text. Hopefully, the creator will take this feedback to heart and make the story more readable because it's quite enjoyable overall!
P.S. If you care at all about the quality of writing, Eternum and Ripples are both pretty solid.
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Mr. K - Aug 08, 2024
3 hours in, I still haven't "done my thing" but I am no where near dissapointed about it! The story is great and the writing is the best ive seen since I started to visit this site.
The models aren't at my personal preference but what the hell does that matter with an immersive story lite this!
Models: 7/10
Story: 10/10
Writing:17/10
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Admin - Jun 21, 2024
Please try switching to Chrome.
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