Eh the story was good could be better if you made a longer version of course, the endings SUUUUUCKED you had a blank fucking screen for all the futures lazy af couldn't even make like two more images for the future scene...I did Luna's ending first and Anna didn't leave city to another college but then I picked her ending and she left me to go to school and instead of being a husband for her and living in that city with her we stayed apart STUPID that never works out so it's unrealistic and I don't even want to do Eliza's the other two where let downs and I can't get endings for any of the others girl like Alic, Beatrice, or the twins
there may be a few typos or spelling mistakes and a few errors, but since this is a nice, original story with a lot of pretty girls and is actually one of the rare finished stories, i rate it 5 stars!
The part with Lis and Meg is already disturbing.
Are they really elementary students, based on their uniforms? Or is it just from a different enough school?
NO WHAT!?!? So you don't know anything about Japanese uniforms and colors...colors differ not only between grades but different schools may use the same color as a different grade...so red may be elementary in one school but then red in another school could be high school seniors!!! There is absolutely no way the color of a uniform alone means that, unless they said red uniforms are elementary
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Yeah, that mustbe it.π£ππ«π©π€π‘πΏπΉ
Anonymoususer - Jan 23, 2022
Are they really elementary students, based on their uniforms? Or is it just from a different enough school?
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